My first attempt

by **dart314** Sun Oct 23, 2011 6:12 pm

Since this site has changed so much since i got i figured i should start tryin to learn graphics. This was my first time usin photoshop or anything so let me know what you think.
Original image:

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Final Product:

Solar
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Criticism?
Suggestions?

by **X_Ex7-_z** Sun Oct 23, 2011 6:40 pm

I already told you what I think
I think that for your very first attempt this is great.
The blur was a little too much but it looks good.
You left the right side kind of empty with just the C4D.
I think you should have put the render in the middle.
Add C4D either behind him or on top of him.
The blur on top of him as well.
You asked me what C4D is and I explained. So it's fine. It's your first time.
You didn't know.
I have faith in your art work...
I can actually see you going somewhere.
Please continue with Gfx...
Keep it up.

by **dart314** Sun Oct 23, 2011 6:55 pm

thnx, there is actually c4d to his left and behind him, for somereason the graphic in the back is brighter than it is in photoshop. thanks again for the advice